本帖最后由 purple芊 于 2015-1-12 14:35 编辑
2015年1月9日
上网课,老师让孩子们用红色字的5个词编一段话,这是miley的,我总觉有些语法问题,指她一下,她很不耐烦。
One day,a boy finds a box in his garden.he opens it,there is a paper and a map.The paper saidsays: Follow this map,you will find the heritage of a man.the boy follow the map and come to a temple,the boy go in to the temple, and find manysome treasure in it,there is a paper on the floor,the paper saidsays: these treasure is come删除 from a rich man in Qing dynasty.Please preserve these treasure forever.the boy is overjoy,and he stays in the temple forever for protecting the heritage until he is dead. 孩子编的故事很棒哦,粉红色是我认为有错的
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